Whats your name?

by WiNgS Of StEeL   Jun 20, 2007


When i saw you walking, i knew it must be.
that your the only one for me.
my heart beat fast, and my breath came short,
i wanted to talk to you but i fought.

i resisted the urge to ask your name,
and i often wondered if i was truly insane.
never in a million years would i ask your name,
afraid that you mite laugh and walk away.

though courage prevailed and i knew at once,
that this was the moment Ive been waiting for.
I slowly gazed into those beautiful brown eyes,
and caught my breath at the site i saw,
an untold love deep inside you, and at that
moment i knew.
You were the one for me,
you were the one who would set me free.
i smiled a hesitant smile, and you smiled back,
knowing what was on my mind,
you didn't step back.

i shivered from the touch of your hand,
wondering if it was true,
then you whispered closely in my ear,
"all these years Ive been waiting for you"

whats your name?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shokry Al Qubati

    Wow, it's really nice and true. It's really of the best. 5/5 xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris Rodriguez

    Very uplifting write. Everyone who see's someone they truly are attracted to, we feel the urge to be confident and go up to meet that person. Easier said than done, I'm afraid. Very enjoyable poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by JaMeS

    Incredible ending part to that one a story told very well!!

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    Beautiful ,love does and will come true but it takes time.

  • 16 years ago

    by STEVE

    Beautiful ,love does and will come true but it takes time.