Delusion

by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx   Jun 23, 2007


I walk as I dream in cold tears
I stare as the blood creeps me over
I see your lifeless body on the floor
Swimming in pools of blood

A thousand memories flashes
In this shattered glass
As I hit myself and break into tears
Never seeing the paradise I long to hold

Thinking that one sweet sacrifice
Would relieve all the sorrow
I tried to scream but not knowing how
I beg for you to erase me from this broken past

I opened my eyes and see nothing but black
Sat up and think of what has been done
I raise my hands onto my face
And see your blood all over it
knowing that I was the one who killed you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Every stanza has superb atmosphere!!! I really enjoyed in this poem. Very interesting and original ending. (it reminds me on one mine old poem) Imagery is great and you wrote this piece excellently. It really deserves 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    This one is a great poem, it's my first time to read a twisted poem and i enjoy reading it. i was analyzing the meaning behind it,i finally get what you mean in it and it was so sad..Great work keep it up!!1

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Kind of cliche to me but also it had a bit of twist. I did enjoy that twist because I belive it made it not as cliche as most poems. Emotions were interesting and powerful in some places. I did like this. Good effort. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Thanks ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats very very deep writing. its good poem xxx

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