Intoxicated Beauty

by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx   Jul 2, 2007


Evening falls,
You held on to it tightly
as the rope leads you,
leads you down in the depths below
and leaves you falling with the wind.

You just closed your eyes
and held a smile,
so peaceful and full of innocence.

Suddenly, black roses began to appear,
Showering in the dark heavens above.
It touches your pale skin,
so smooth and soft.

But as you draw closer to the ground,
a white puff flashes in your mind
which made you close your eyes tighter
wherein a tear slid down your cheeks.

I imagined a single drop
yet it was full of thousand emotions
all trapped inside clear crystal cage.

Hatred, sadness and then,
everything went silent.
You tried to ease the pain
And I was just there, watching.

Watching every motion of you,
falling, so helpless but calm.
Oh how I adore your sadness,
your sweet smile.

For others, you have a demented beauty,
but for me it was holy.

The black rose wrapped in your hand,
I stared at the scene before my eyes
and you bid me a silent farewell.

Confusion and bewilderment,
Rage and hatred,
Sadness and sorrow,
Delusion and betrayal.
All in one mesmerizing green eyes.

How I loved it dear,
loved every moment you kill me.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Nix

    Very very deep... Very powerful ending, it was effective. I love your style of writing, you always create amazing atmosphere.
    Well done! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Beautiful Imagery, you are very talented,
    "How I loved it dear,
    loved every moment you kill me. "

    - Sad words, easy to relate to
    Keep It Up

  • 12 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    This poem has such devotion and passion, can really feel it jump out of the page.. well screen! lol. very beautiful 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    It is dark and sad. It was wonderful, It was incredibly descriptful, It painted a clear picture and the emotion was strong, It was a great piece, 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Mo

    This was very different and I could picture it all happening as you tell the story. Great wording and good idea for a poem. However, I would just suggest you read through it again as there are a few minor words missing here and there that could make it flow a bit easier.

    Liked it a lot.

    Mo

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