I am

by Loved In Hell   Jun 29, 2007


I dont fit in,
Anywhere I go,
If I fit in itâ??s because
M y true face I do not show

Why cant you love me?
For who I truly am
Just please realize I am not perfect
And I am not a little lamb

I am a person
A real life someone
My wish is to be unique
My work is never done

I love certain stuff
This is me
When you ask me to change
Its like drowning me at sea

Please accept me
And all I have
This is for you, family
Mom and dad

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  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Aww, a touching and poignant piece. Keep it up
    xox Greta

  • 16 years ago

    by Clown

    Beautifuly written, ur emotions truly shown through this. I loved how it feels like ur talking to society at the beganing, and ur really talking to ur family. I know how u feel, I feel like i am the black sheep of family, I feel as though I dont fit in with there shallow beleafs, except my mother. shes the only one who accepts me,

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    I love your style..
    and your words.
    keep it up!
    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    It is great, this poem is unique and honest. It is simple but very powerful. Good message and topic is very well.
    Excellently written, 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Everything behind this poem was wonderful, but the flow between stanzas just wasn't there for me when I read it.

    4/5.

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