Friends Forever Part 2

by So Wrong its Right   Jul 3, 2007


When i see his face
i always think of light
over time, i've thought out my feelings
now i know i am right

sometimes it's hard
to see his face everyday
because my feelings overcome me
in every single way

but he has a girlfriend
who i despise very much
she thinks she is cool
when their hands meet and touch

but she is threatened by our friendship
which is fine by me
because we have been friends forever
and together we should be

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This first part to me way way better then this one. Again you need to captalize your "I's" in my opinion. I did like the word choice though simple and effective. A good effort.~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    This is such a beatiful second part
    to the first

    i just loved the ending
    becasue it just tied it all together
    and didnt leave room for more

    like other people
    who just leave the poem haning

    good job, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Nawww.. That's beautiful. The ending is what made me go "nawwww" lol. very nice poem.
    "over time, i've thought out my feelings
    now i know i am right" << Those 2 lines were my fave! Great work.
    5/5
    .x

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Third stanza is bad. You should not write this part two. First was so much better. Maybe me and you have different views on poetry. Sorry but I don't like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I've been in a similar situation, and I know the feeling.
    Another one greatly written poem, I like the flow and the words that you used.
    5/5

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