Tick, Tock

by So Wrong its Right   Sep 22, 2007


Tick, tick, tick, the clock is tocking
thump, thump, thump, my heart is pounding
life is waiting,
the door is closed

time is running out
says the tick tocking clock
hurry, hurry
says my thumping, pounding heart

ka-cunk, ka-cunk
my time is short
boom, boom
my heart is racing

too many thoughts
not enough time
too many dreams
so little triumph

tick, tick, tick, the clock is tocking
thump, thump, thump, my heart is pounding
life is waiting,
open the door

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  • 16 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Excellent, I hadn't read anything like it before... :) really well written
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very well written, very unique in the way you write. good job!

    Peace, Joe

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    Ah! I think this is wonderfully and uniquely penned. It was simple, but elegant, and holds more depth than meets the eye. Good rhythm,
    and excellent job!

    Write On!
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Honestly i'm kindda confused with the real meaning of it.. or am i just looking in a deeper side of it? Ok correct me if i'm wrong based on my own comprehension.. you have less oppurtunity but you never give up to attain your dreams? (is that so? well if it was then you have great meaning of poem).. this confused me a bit but i like the concept of it kindda unique..

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Very well written. Keep up the good work!!!!!!

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