Fight for Yourself

by So Wrong its Right   Jun 6, 2007


My friend has a problem
That must be figured out
And it is a problem
That I'm happy I know nothing about

She really needs help
She is getting it too
But I just wish her reassurances
Were completely true

Her music has helped her
Her friends' feelings touched
The only thing that's not helping
Her parents don't support much

She is making it through
Every step bit by bit
Of recovering from this illness
I know she'll get through it

Fight for your life
And all of your hopes and dreams
Find something that makes you happy
It helps no matter how miserable you may seem

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Extremely great*

    Excuse my spelling error.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This poem had a nice concept behind it, I found it to be kind of sweet in it's own little way. The flow was off in some places though. I belive some parts to be etremely great while others lacked. A good effort though. ~mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    "Find something that makes you happy
    It helps no matter how miserable you may seem"

    this stanza could be taken
    as a way to live life

    like people arent as miserable as
    they seem, just talk to them
    and you will see

    idk, i just think weird

    but i thought it was a great poem
    and i loved it

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lozbi

    Your poems are truly amazing. The last stanza was my fave this time. Especially these 2 lines "Fight for your life
    And all of your hopes and dreams".. Another wonderful poem
    5/5
    .x

  • 18 years ago

    by Nix

    These poem is so so. Some parts are good but others not. I don't like the flow. First stanza is good. Second is just great, that is my favorite. Third is poor and fourth is worse then first two. The last stanza is nicely written and i liked it. These poem is 3/5

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