Story

by Loved In Hell   Jul 28, 2007


*copyrighted by a very good friend who has an amazing ability to write but is scared to let his true self show*

A lonely wolf walks past a man, stops and stares deep in the man's soul.
A tear falls and the wolf sees all the mistakes the man had made and the promises he had broken to the one he loved.
The man wipes away the tear and stares back into the wolf's eyes only to see the one he loves weeping and moaning over a broken and shattered promise.
The vision fades in the beasts eyes the wolf begins to run.
The man chases after it knowing that the wolf is leading him to his lover.
As the man runs he falls into the ocean going under the waves.
He looks up to see through the ripples of water there he sees a figure of the wolf blending into the blurry vision of his girl.
She reaches down for his hand but his fingers slip through hers and he falls to depths. She dives in after him all she can do is embrace him as he does the same.
They die in each others arms.

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  • 16 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Wow, your friend is amazing, awesome stuff.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Reaper

    This is really good. I loved it. 5/5 from me.

  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    Aww.. That was so sweet. Very touching.
    Nicely done.
    Keep it up!

    TC

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    .............................okeeee

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very creative piece of poetry. Loved the wordings and the metaphorical content. The way words strung makes it cohesive and a quality piece. Only thing I would suggest is to improve the structure, 5/5 from me :)

    Fsams

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