Broken Beauty

by luv Shelbz luv   Aug 3, 2007


The time he broke my heart
And tore it all to pieces
He left without a single goodbye
Said he needed to do some thinking
(my ex-boyfriend)

The time she stabbed me in the back
With all the lies she told
And made my life a living hell
I never new she was so bold
(my ex-bff)

The time I was picked on in school
With all those dirty sayings
And running to the bathroom everyday
To get on to praying
(being picked on at school)

The time I broke that vase
And being yelled at
Saying I was sorry and taking it in
I guess I deserved that

I am a Broken Beauty
And you might feel the same way to
We go through a lot and live life
And this is what I say to you
Even though we have our troubles
Its no need to sit and cry
You'll go through a lot in life's journey
You need to suck it up and get by

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  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I love it so much.
    It was really good and yet again it proves you are a wonderful writer.
    keep it up.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

    btw. the comment that you left on my extra baggage poem.. your right its a meataphor.. saying that She has alot of problems in her life and she doesn't get help for them, so she has them all hanging on to her.
    Does that make sense?
    hope so.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    I like it

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Keep writing to me you have great potential and within time you will start writing piece that everyone can relate to no matter what age. This was also really good. A great read to me. Don't give up. ~mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Lovely. && Very true.
    "You'll go through a lot in life's journey
    You need to suck it up and get by"

    ^ I love that ending, it sums up the poem perfectly. :P The flow was good && the emotions were strong && clear. && The message was good also. Fantastic job. 5.5 Keep writing.

    - Stephyy <3

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxSurrenderToMyWrathxXx

    This is one of the greatest poems ever written!!! I love it! Great Job!!!!!

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