Dont Try

by SpEcIaLmE   Oct 9, 2007


Don't try to imagine how i feel
When you make me cry and tell me to go away
Don't try to imagine how i feel
Because i will tell you
Anger, loneliness, confusion and pain
Are all mixed up inside me
Don't try to imagine how i feel
For it feels like an icy wind is all around me
I want to cry and scream and run away
Don't try to imagine how i feel
Try to imagine how you would feel
If this was happening to you

Please comment thanks Its my first poem.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very good poem. It was decently written with a good flow. The concept was really great as well...

    "Don't try to imagine how I feel,
    Just imagine how you would feel,
    If this was happening to you"

    ^^ This ending was terrific. It was well written and had emotion to it. It also had a very good meaning behind it that a lot of people should look at.

    Very good write! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    I love it!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I liked the ending alot...
    I can relate to it cos I had when peoples try to compare their life to mine... Like it really aggrivates me... And like they got no idea what im going through and how i got no one to help me deal with it and shit
    annnndd yeaaah

    nice poem luvvv
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    This is so cliche.
    Everyone can say this.
    This isn't written from the heart.

    I'm sorry, I'm not trying to be rude.

    I just really try to encourage people to reach into their hearts and write.
    And that's really want you need to do.

    This poem doesn't express any emotion. It's just words to me.
    It doesn't rhyme, flow, or present itself in anyway.
    I'm sorry.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 3.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a great poem it was even your 1st. well done. My first poem wasn't good lol. Keep up the good work. you have the potential to improve :)

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