Is It True?

by SpEcIaLmE   Dec 14, 2007


Slowly getting better
Starting to see hope again
Is this true?
Is this really happening?

No, I'm not dreaming
Its really getting better
How long will it go on for?
Hopefully forever

I can start to see
The old me again
Some smiles are no longer fake
Some laughs no longer forced

It really is getting better
Please dont let me fall again
Because next time I wont
Get back up

please rate and comment, i would really appreciate it i will return the favour and i would love to know what people think of this poem

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Very very good poem it was short but sweet : ) i hope it did last for you! great job 5/5<33

  • 16 years ago

    by xBxRxOxKxExNx

    Oh ma god!! wow!! it's exactly how i'm feeling at the momentttt! X

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    I think u should have made the lines a little bit longer and more expressed. using big words can be a chore, but it helps

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I hope I'll feel be better too :( I'm always sad... anyway good for you that you feel happy again! :) flow was good well done, keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Sumit Ojha

    Huh... Good poem... Nice work... !
    oh by the way, Yes it's true...