Wind Is Softly Blowing (Monchielle)

by Cindy   Nov 26, 2007


Wind Is Softly Blowing (Monchielle)

Staring at the ocean
The stars are in the sky
Wind is softly blowing
Wishing you were with me
My heart it is glowing

Staring at the ocean
Sending you all my love
Upon a gentle breeze
Carrying me to you
All my fears you will ease

Staring at the ocean
Moon is softly shining
On this wondrous night
Needing to touch your hand
Until the morning light

Staring at the ocean
Hear music from the waves
Your voice carried to me
Filling me with your love
Your face I finally see

The Monchielle is a poem that consists of four five-line stanzas where the first line repeats in
each verse. Each line within the stazas consist of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme.
The rhyme pattern is Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml.

Written By: Cynthia Graver Nov 25, 2007

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  • 16 years ago

    by chavii

    Cindy, its such beautiful tranquil poem with vivid imagery.I visualise the ocean the gentle breeze, with loved one.Awesome poem :)

    Love chavii.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Such a beautiful piece I must say. The emotions which flowed nicely throughout this etched onto my heart and stayed there to even when i had finished reading this poem. The style is great you wrote is so amazingly and the meaning behind it captured my soul and put it into a daze. Such a gorgeous piece Cindy. I loved it. Well done. 5/5 ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Lithium

    Thats a fantasic piece cindy again very creative showing your poetry styles which i must say you present very well. a lovely poem brings brings the sweetest love into sight. xox sam

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Beautiful. That was picture perfect, literally. 5/5
    These lines hit me most:
    "Staring at the ocean
    Sending you all my love
    Upon a gentle breeze
    Carrying me to you
    All my fears you will ease"

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Tis a great poem cindy, never seen this style before but you did excellent at it, the flow tis perfect and i dont see any mistakes, i give it a 5/5!!! keep these styles coming!!!

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