Doubt (Mirror Cinquain)

by Meena Krish   Feb 23, 2015


Doubt is
a poison that
destroys each thriving bond,
it leaves no room for compromise
or chance;
Simple
truth turns blind and falls on deaf ears,
doubt...makes an open heart
close its doors in
anger.

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  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Firstly, many thanks for your kind comments on some of my poems, and may I just say how true this poem is. Excellently written, too.

  • 2 years ago

    by Sandstorm

    Loved it. Refreshing form too :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Vawooooooomeena ji

    Very nice poem & correct

  • 2 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Nice poem Meena! Doubts indeed can lead to breaking bonds but sometimes telling the truth could hurt the ones closes to you and may change them from who they are. Secret is like an anchor, the more you hold on, the more it gets deeper and heavier.

  • 2 years ago

    by GB

    Fascinating how you doubled and reflected this format, the shape is pretty like the diamante. Darkly interesting theme as well, despite the simple wording. Very enjoyable, Meena.