You...a gift I thank

by Meena Krish   Oct 27, 2015


In the shade of your heart
memories kick away doubts,
feelings of You... burns the sorrow
in brown eyes;

We may be just a touch away
but our words are children at play,
like an unforgettable book,
I'm lost within the ocean of your
soothing coos,

You are the pillar in my life
who held the weight in my
eyes, you're the keeper of
joys and woes -killer of my
ravenous past;

Life is full of surprises and
you are one of them,
to know you and have you in my life...
is Gods' precious gift which
I thank.

A poem written using titles from my
other poems.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is lovely to read, and I like how you have created this with your previous titles, what a fun challenge to do. I might try this myself when I get time to write!

    There is so much truth in this poem, and makes you grateful for the gifts in life that we forget to be thankful for!

    Lovely words

  • 8 years ago

    by Timothy

    I am glad to see when u deleted your account u came to your senses and came back here. I am very glad to see it's only been a short time since your last poem on this site. I have checked the people from way back (can you believe over 10 years now?) and none of them are still writing besides you and me! Replied to your PM from June, just saw it, sorry, don't think I have been on here since then, before today. Take care.

  • 8 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    This was such a beautiful poem and the stanza that got me blown away was probably the third one, maybe because I relate the most to that one, but anyways it is beautiful, unique, interesting and to end all else fascinating that you made a poem with the titles of other poems and it feels like something warm to read in any season of the year and brings happiness it's so delicate and loving!

    - Moria Bella Bair

    P.s. thank you for reading my poem! Have a lovely day! :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Not as simple as the title implies, really smart play on words and very sincere draft of expression!

    I loved the pour of emotions in each verse and love the way everything rhymed so well! It's very easy to imagine the whole scene relying on your metaphors and descriptive tone.

    There is the dark and the light side in this poem,
    it takes you in and out and then in and out
    until you reach the last verse and learn how grateful
    you are as the character in this piece.

    In the shade of your heart
    memories kick away doubts,
    feelings of You... burns the sorrow
    in brown eyes;
    ^^^^^
    What a verse ! When love is powerful
    enough to heal the wounds. Beautiful just beautiful feelings.

    Thank you for sharing.

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Beautifully written, missed reading your poems :)

    Using your own titles & building a beautiful piece like this...just shows your immense talent.

    Loved the last stanza...

    all the best & take care dear Sis

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