I am glad to see when u deleted your account u came to your senses and came back here. I am very glad to see it's only been a short time since your last poem on this site. I have checked the people from way back (can you believe over 10 years now?) and none of them are still writing besides you and me! Replied to your PM from June, just saw it, sorry, don't think I have been on here since then, before today. Take care.
This was such a beautiful poem and the stanza that got me blown away was probably the third one, maybe because I relate the most to that one, but anyways it is beautiful, unique, interesting and to end all else fascinating that you made a poem with the titles of other poems and it feels like something warm to read in any season of the year and brings happiness it's so delicate and loving!
- Moria Bella Bair
P.s. thank you for reading my poem! Have a lovely day! :)
Not as simple as the title implies, really smart play on words and very sincere draft of expression!
I loved the pour of emotions in each verse and love the way everything rhymed so well! It's very easy to imagine the whole scene relying on your metaphors and descriptive tone.
There is the dark and the light side in this poem,
it takes you in and out and then in and out
until you reach the last verse and learn how grateful
you are as the character in this piece.
In the shade of your heart
memories kick away doubts,
feelings of You... burns the sorrow
in brown eyes;
What a verse ! When love is powerful
enough to heal the wounds. Beautiful just beautiful feelings.