The Silence of Our Lives

Judging comment

"The Silence of Our Lives" By Larry Chamberlain 7 points

This poem By Larry is what I classify as a "lift and drop".

The beginning lifts the readers spirits and makes us think of that time when we first met. Nostalgia kicks straight in at this point.

Then comes the drop. Relationships end and sometimes it's not in a good way, in fact they rarely end in a good way. The slam of a door can often be the last sound that you will hear that person make.

But the end is not in sight. We all get a "lift, drop, Lift"

It's not often we read things like this. A happy ending is one that will always make me smile and grow a little tear.

Well written and chronologically thought out . (7)

Congrats on the Win!!

Congrats on your win, Larry.

This actually shows the depth of understanding in a
relationship. Most of the time in that silence many a thing
and emotion can be understood and is known. Words aren't
needed when silence answers all your needs...nice write :)

Larry, absolutely love this. It's so real and how a relationship ebbs and flows. Well done-