Why we make collect calls and wear overcoats

I hate to repeat myself but I have to in this case- simply impressive.
This piece seem simple but it is so overwhelmingly intricate. I admire your writing skills. Your choice of words here is superb, and they form such outstanding images and deep meaning. I can relate to this in a way but I probably don't have the same interpretation of these lines as you. Anyway, this is remarkable- that is the only word I can remember to describe such powerful piece.
Just one critique: Did you wrote 'i' and 'cant' with some purpose I can't see? Maybe it would look better if it would be "I" and "can't" but that's truly minor comparing to the depths of the poem.
Fantastically done.

Okay I may be completely wrong...but I wonder, if you do not breathe while sleeping, and you think you may have slept through it all...
Then it ties together very well with the last line, dead and dreaming.
I feel like a complete idiot trying to analyze this, lol. I enjoy that it seems like a puzzle, but at the same time...I don't enjoy making a fool of myself! :) I will try another poem and see if it will make more sense to me.

Whoo, big words! lol I didn't really understand it, but I still liked it... Don't think I'm dumb when I say that, I really did like it. :)

It was randomly...perfect! the only part that really got me confused and like "and ur point is...?" was the alchemy part.

If u could explain (if u wish) what that means id GREATLY appreciate it.

Even if I don't TOTALLY understand, i still give it a 5/5!

xD

:) It's like a nerd wrote it. That's a good thing I love it when people use words that are not commonly used in real life. When I have kids I'll raise them on reading and memorizing random words from the dictionary and playing scrabble. Whenever my dad plays something unfamilair I ask why can't people use words like that all of the time?! If we never do our vocabularies will never expand! I give it a five for being very unique from the typical poem. Good job.