This is beautiful, absolutely beautiful. I could almsot feel myself under that tree, listening to him sing and play the guitar for me. I'm so glad that you have fond memories like this to cherish in your loss.
I just discovered this wonderful piece, as I am new here, and I have to say, I feel like such an intruder reading your beautiful words.The way that you seem to infuse a piece of your soul into this... it leaves me speechless. You brought tears to my eyes.
The imagery you used was outstanding, thank you so much for sharing with us!
Hi cindy, i'm a friend of pauls, i just wanted to say that i'm sorry to hear about you getting put in the hospital but i'm very pleased to hear that you are doing well. I hope to read more poetry from you. About the poem--i love it! it's amazing. I can feel so much pain behind this.....taylor swift don't have anything on you :) you're an amazing poetess. I love it! 5/5