Our Lonely Home

I realy understand the why you wrote this poem.. when the memories of our loved one hurt us inside we cry and want to share our emotions to who we care. but how sad for who we write they were not with us. and we cry for them.

i am really sorry about the death of your husband.. maybe this is life and we have to accpet every circumstance.

i do respect your this poem and i do respect you more than every person on this website. great work ....

Beautiful sensational & tender... You're a gifted amazing writer...5/5 keep writing

Very nicely done! & I'm sorry for your loss! You expressed youself really well in this piece. I liked it alot. Flow was nice. And it was full of emotions that anyone could feel and relate to. Keep it up!

Knowing this is all a dream
Yet it's one I won't set free
I need you here to dry my tears
Giving all your love to me

^ this is amazingly sweet. anyone who has lost a loved one can completely understand this.

you captured such an amazing longing and heartache in these simple words. wonderous job. and i am sorry for your loss. god bless.

Brilliant touching poem, sorry for your loss