Golden Meadow Dream (Trijan Refrain)

by Cindy   Mar 27, 2008


Trijan Refrain

If love is what you're looking for
It's in this heart of mine
you are the one I will adore
Until the end of time
I'll wait for you to come to me
When the stars are shining brightly
I'll wait for you
I'll wait for you
I will always be your lady

Falling forever in loves embrace
Under mellow moonlight
Luminous beams light up your face
To fulfill passion's night
Hold me tight now don't let me go
Being together hearts aglow
Hold me tight now
Hold me tight now
Alone in a golden meadow

Waking realizing just a dream
Your gone no longer here
My joy replaced with silent screams
On my pillow a tear
Please come for me take me away
To a place where you'll always stay
Please come for me
Please come for me
Can't live without you one more day

Trijan Refrain:
The Trijan Refrain, created by Jan Turner, consists of three 9-line stanzas, for a total of 27 lines.
Line 1 is the same in all three stanzas, although a variation of the form is not to repeat the same line
at the beginning of each stanza. In other words, the beginning line of each stanza can be different.
The first four syllables of line 5 in each stanza are repeated as the double-refrain for lines 7 and 8.
The Trijan Refrain is a rhyming poem with a set meter and rhyme scheme as follows:

Rhyme scheme: a/b/a/b/c/c/d,d refrain of first 4 words of line five /c

Meter: 8/6/8/6/8/8/4,4 refrain/8

Written by: Cynthia Graver March 26, 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good job on the flow and form!!

    ^If love is what you're looking for
    It's in this heart of mine
    you are the one I will adore
    Until the end of time
    I'll wait for you to come to me
    When the stars are shining brightly
    I'll wait for you
    I'll wait for you
    I will always be your lady^

    Beautifully penned!!!

    ^Waking realizing just a dream
    Your gone no longer here
    My joy replaced with silent screams
    On my pillow a tear
    Please come for me take me away
    To a place where you'll always stay
    Please come for me
    Please come for me
    Can't live without you one more day.^

    A sad ending. This poem is full of emotion. This last stanza brings a tear to the eye. It is so difficult to lose someone we love. Wonderful job on this piece!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Liked everything abt this beautiful poem.

    If love is what you're looking for
    It's in this heart of mine

    i so very much liked the way you started it and then so smoothly putting the right feeling at the right place for making it such a beautiful poem. Great work dear.

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by moonlil

    I love this poem. Great job. I love all the words. It flows very good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I love your word choice in this beautifully penned piece. The flow was excellent and the form was very well done. A write many can relate to.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Please come for me
    Please come for me
    Can't live without you one more day

    My sweet Cindy,

    I love this beautiful poem, it speaks so clearly of the longing in your heart.
    Well done, my sweet girlfriend!

    Love Ingrid

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