Kiss her tears away

by Dark Secrets   May 7, 2008


Spacious is the room around her
Yet her shadow dwells a corner
Silence broken by sniffs and gasps
Accompanied by the darkened walls

Living but dead, enchanted weeping
Over the soulless body she'd become
Bruises crawl beneath her delicate skin
An emotional virus rips her heart

A conference of a million held in her head
Playing videos blotted by a melancholical past
Coercing her brain to throb in excruciating pain
Swollen eyes forcing bloody crimson tears

Prisoner of this vainful realm of depression
Under the rule of it's stark king of demise
She awaits her prince; her guardian angel
Wishing him to fly her away to the heavens blue

But she doesn't need him to snatch her spirit away
All she needs is your tender loving care
A kiss to free her from the virtual tormenting jail
Go on before it sucks her soul, Kiss her tears away

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  • 2 years ago

    by Ben

    I really like this poem, your phrasing and word choice are wonderful and you paint some very vivid images with your words :)

    the first i've read from you and i look forward to reading more.

    Great job

    Ben

  • 10 years ago

    by XXmizz juiceXX

    Love dis poem its nice :}

  • 11 years ago

    by P00ki3B3ar

    WOnderful i love this one too ive only read three of your poems now but they are beautiful your a wonderful writer

    "Bruises crawl beneath her delicate skin
    An emotional virus rips her heart"

    i like how you put the emotional pain as a virus ripping her apart

    overall a great poem 5/5 again :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Annaam

    WOWW !!
    Excellent Work! :)
    I love the description and the perfect use of vocabulary here!

    Keep up the great work! :)

    5/5.

  • 12 years ago

    by ChloeLauren

    Very descriptive.
    Very powerful
    Very interesting
    Very AMAZING!!

    Well Done!

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