Fluffy The Dust Bunny

by Hollymariee   Nov 3, 2008


His name is Fluffy ;
Fluffy the dust bunny .
Be watchful of your money ,
He thinks people in pain are funny ,
He's repelled by anything sunny ..
His name is Fluffy ;
Fluffy the dust bunny .

For Fluffy there isn't much to be said ;
He lives under my bed .
He has a messed up head ,
He doesn't take his meds ,
His eyes are bloodshot red ,
Because he won't stop smoking lead ,
Pickles he likes to be fed ..
For Fluffy there isn't much to be said ;
He lives under my bed .

Lmao if you're wondering , fluffy is a creature that my cousin created for a creative writting assignment and she sent me the story .. And I decided to make a poem out of it . We were 13 .

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  • 15 years ago

    by Not Enough

    AAww,,, it's a cute poem. Very enjoyable. The flow is kind of off for me, but I don't mind because it's nice. (if that makes sense) Though I do like the rhyme scheme.I like the image I got in my head lol

  • 15 years ago

    by Kitten

    This is an adorable poem. I like how you came up with it. It remindes me of the dust bunny under my bed, that might not be there anymore since my mom vaccumed. I like how you ended it. Good rhyming job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by NeverBelieve

    Before i read your comment and the bottom i was thinkin hummm well ok:S? but its a cute and funny poem haha 5/5 Nb

  • 15 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Awww... that was soo cute and funny. that... was very entertaining. good job. 5/5 ~KM~

  • 15 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Hey there is another poem about jeff the mad bunny its in my favs maybe you should check it out.

    other then that i have never heard a bunny smoke lead sweatness, i know you have never heard this but sometimes grammer and punction takes away from the fun of writing poetry. just wanted to say it
    other then that this poem is actually kinda funny it made me chuckle.
    Raindrops-
    5/5

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