Finally Smiles Upon My Face

Wonderful begining, and a beautiful end. Very well done, and worded. What a way to see a passing, as a release from all the pains, and the dread. And, perhaps, a flight into a so wanted paradise.

Beautiful really..
it's like i feel your pain in the lines you wrote..

Really touching

Very touching piece Cindy ...

"Life has stolen so much
Everyone I love goes away
Nothing left but my voice
It's being silenced everyday "

^^ thats the game life plays with us ... it presents us with wonderful moments only to be snatched away.. what remains is memories... wonderfully penned...

"Maybe I will find some peace
Shadows chase me through my days
Magical dreams were shattered
Shine your loving light my way "

^^ there is so much sadness and loneliness in these lines ... very hearfel lines...

beautiful piece...

Cindy,

I can only imagine this kind of pain, a pain that is a constant, torturous and seemingly full of malace. I can almost imagine such a fantasy, a time in the future where such a burden would be lifted and pain would feature no more, instead it would be replaced with smiles reflected from kind familiar faces.

Well done on this my dear. :)

Take care

Michael

I must say that I really enjoyed the first stanza a lot, it really drew me in and made me want to read more.. I do agree with the fact that sometimes pain becomes so much that it feels like its eating you alive almost.. this was quite sad but some of that sadness went away towards the end, yet some still is there..

A very well written poem.

Impressive,
5/5.