You Can't Crush My Dreams

Another very sad verse, the flow and rhyme were perfect here and the sadness seemed very real. Nicely done.

Wow this was absolutely beautiful. 5/5

The words you spoke here in this very sad and heartbreaking piece, is sharp and powerful to pierce the coldest of hearts.
Like I said, your words always brings the teras to my eyes and this is no exception.
Awesomely penned though very sad.
Take care my dear friend.
Paul...

Cindy,
This is such a sad write. I have told you many times before to never let anyone crush your dreams. I understand the pain and know that this write comes from the very heart of the pain when you feel like everyone around you has left you alone. Remember you are never alone.
Love you,
Kay

This is emotional. And this is very emotional.
One can feel your words. I don't have much to say as I know from where it came. Only thing I would like to say that if I look at it mere poetic point of view even then I find it a very well written poem. Lovely flow and words from the heart. Well done, Cindy... take care!