Yesterday's Laughter

It's a little depressive write. There is so much pain of losing the joy that reflects in your words. I liked the simplicity of this write. And the emotional aspect. A good write. But you don't know about tomorrow. May be it's waiting for you with a big joyous surprise!

Where is yesterday's laughter?

Todays are filled with sorrows.

Tomorrows lost their promise.

Yesterday, today, tomorrow.

With thse four lines you've covered a whole lot of sadness my friend.The rest of words that made up these stanzas are as painful as
the meaning behind it.
Yesterda we laugh,
Today we cry,
Tomorrow we hope for a better day,
but in reality, the emotional pain we feel inside are greater than any comfort we may get from our friends and family.
I know only too well of your emotional struggles and from where this sad yet beautifully penned piece has derrived.
Take care my friend and do have a safe, peacefull and wonderful day.
Your friend always,
Paul...

A sad write... So well written and expressed. Pain and loneliness is etched on every line... A touching write Cindy.

"Where is yesterday's laughter?
Sometimes the only thing is left are memories. I believe that a good friend that makes you laugh last year, will still brings laughter this year because what is pure might be fragile, but the good thing is it lingers forever. I love this my friend, well done, 5/5, kel.

This poem was truly sad but written really good. The rhyme in your poem was good and you followed it all the way through and the flow was good as well. Just remember that happiness will come. Great Job. -Jad