Tormented Dreams

Coming back to the site after a long while, I somehow knew that I would be reading a masterpiece from you.But was not prepared for this very dark and chilling piece.It is both dark and sad but awesomely penned.

This one really captured the terror of nightmares really well.How it ended was really sad how the figure decided to embrace death instead of face them. It very well written i thought. 5/5

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Oh my dear Cindy. This poem is so dark, it gave me chills. It is magnificent and horrifying. The last stanza is great. Your word choice was just perfect. I miss you, dear, and hope this comment finds you well.

Cold and spooky, like death. A perfect Halloween poem. "Wreak", not "reek" though :-)

How deep and dark this is...wow. Awesome word choice, it really deepened the mood quite a bit..sends shivers down the spine. Great work .. lets put up some love happy poems now .. ok? :] Take care. Love ya :]