Fireworks Tonight....

by Dreamofolwin   Oct 29, 2009


I'm gona watch some fireworks tonight,
Gona wrap up warm, and huddle up tight.
Gona hold onto my little ones hands,
And watch their faces as they stand...

In awe, and amazement, in wonderment,
At the display in the sky that for them is sent.
Exploding! cartwheeling, way up high...
Dazzling the blackness, sparkling the sky.

Yes I'm gona watch, some fireworks tonight,
Gona watch my little ones faces afright.
Gona squeal and scream, MY face full of glee,
I wonder who the child is... them or me!

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  • 8 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, this is totally cute and relatable!

  • 16 years ago

    by Konstantin

    I can't say it's very funny. It's just lovely.
    Konstantin.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Smallshaw

    A really excellent poem that brought about many happy memories of Guy Fawkes night past 5/5 Ray S gets one of my votes to

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    What a wonderful poem, awesome. You caught all the expressions so gracefully turned them to words. Its so good that you didnt let the reality of life fade childishness inside.
    Loved it!!

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by anand singh

    Funny and beautiful and a joy to read.So often we do get wrapped up in the things that meant most for kids.Then again, isn't there always a kid in us waiting to emerge?
    You,ve done a beautiful job with this piece my friend.
    Thank you kindly for reading and commenting on my poem of faith.It gives my heart a joy to know that there are still people who believe in our heavenly father.Keep walking in the fith.
    Paul...

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