Gratitude

by Lonely Rider   Dec 1, 2010


Smiles unlimited
showers of genuine love
and parental care,

for days bright with joy
nights studded with moonlit dreams
blessings heavenly,

for those gifted times,
I pay my gratitude, to
each and every one.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I absolutely loved this senryu chain, it was well-constructed and left a smile on my face. Enough times we do not thank even the simplest of deeds and at times we forget who is really important in our daily life.

    Keep writing always and forever.

    God bless you and your family this Christmas.

    MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This is very sweet and well crafted, to give credit where credit is due is always important, for the here and now and for the future. Lots of people forget their helpers once they have arrived, in wahtever way possible.

    Well done,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    A triple Senryu!!

    and so Deeply Meaning Full...
    Bravo!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Raj
    What a beautiful piece :)
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I think this poems speaks of a tender and kind hearted person that just happened to write it. awesome job

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