Trapped

love your writing, I love how it rhymes and how you express yourself. Well done! And thanks for commenting on my poem :) appreciated,.

Matt you've really captured how anger ears away through all aspects of a person's life. A strong warning to people who allow their lives to be consumed. A very enjoyable read. Milly x

This is me most of the time. You captured that feeling very well. Wonderfully written.

Hello there,

I can feel the anger and hatred because you are hurting inside. .Once upon a time I have experience the same feeling,. regret, hatred, anger and the feeling of you wanted to revenge..but that's long long ago. ..I finally moved on..

by the way this lines hit me

"I know its not right
slowly it consumes me
eating away at my soul
leaving me empty"

bravo! nice written piece
Good luck

Gel

Matt, this really hit home to me. It's like you were a fly on the wall in my head or something because right now I feel exactly like this consumed in darkness with no way out.

Great write, Em