Mother (Mirrored Acrostic)

Such a sorrowful poem... You did great with the form... I love how you make your sorrows very creative with your words... 5/5

--- MKKK

Obstinate pain...twirls like a tornado,
^^a storm of obstinate pain surrounds your life.
this is really a strong word that you are expressing your pain.
you are showing the real sadness but the feelings are beautiful if it is come in this ways.
I hope the storms become unhealthy..
wonderful written meena...

Beautiful poem! Love reading it! Great work Meena!

Memories fixed upon the wall bloom

^ in this line I think it may need a comma after wall, to make an emphasis to which one is the verb then a period.

like:

Memories fixed upon the wall, bloom.

I like that line by the way.

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Obstinate pain twirls like a tornado,

-- This line sounds like a fragment like it needs more info ( perhaps, its only for me) but obstinate pain twirls like a tornado... where? per se.
So on the next line, I was hoping to figure it out. Yet I couldn't find the connection... However, I think if you take away the comma and replace it with three periods, it will add some type of mystery.

like this

Obstinate pain twirls like a tornado...

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Tender year is born without her tonight.

-- I feel a period after tonight may work on this line. Like this line can stand on its own.

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Memories fixed upon the wall, bloom.
Obstinate pain twirls like a tornado...
Tender year is born without her tonight.
Howling for love that'll never walk through,
Each day recovery struggles for peace.
Richness of life, empty without a mother.

I thought the melancholy in this piece is spread in each of your words. And I kind of read this poem slow, like making pauses that's kind of the reason why I thought about suggesting some punctuation. Perhaps, it may not be correctly placed in some parts as I'm not really that great with punctuation yet I think it will benefit if it has some.

Take care.