My lost friend

by Rsan   Mar 16, 2014


Gradually my world is falling apart
For without you in it
Is like imagining the night without stars
Everything is like..like nothing but a blur

You really were my everything
Sadly you still are
What i can do to make me forget you
I would sadly hope that it will be true

I really loved you so
Yet i still do
But then why couldn't you see that
All I wished was us!And never apart

I got a special feeling
From first sight
That you are the one and only girl
Who holds the throne to my heart

But love like all feelings
Do either end
Or sometimes cherish long
But with this I just cant go on

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  • 9 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    Sorry about the last comment. To be honest it did read as familiar to me.

    This poem is a sad one. When we fall in love with someone and the feeling is not mutual it hurts. From the love at first sight to the capturing of the 'throne' of your heart.

    The pain of such an unequal love is unbearable.

    A good write.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Rsan

    Losing that special someone is one of the worst things we can face in life, however we lose them.

    Powerful write,
    Ben

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Rsan,

    Beautiful job again. So much raw emotion and many of us can relate to this unfortunately.

    Em

    • 9 years ago

      by Rsan

      Thanks,Em

  • 11 years ago

    by Rsan

    Thanks fellas..

  • 11 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Sad, but a great poem. I can relate to it. great job.

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