My Clavicle Still Bleeds

Loved this poem, very visual i felt it. Proud to read this, a poem from a fellow Filipino. 5/5

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What't a wonderful piece of writing

Nominated, wow dashiel, this poem is wonderful, It seems to be about the loneliness that surrounds us. You used to walk that hallway or house a million times but without this person in your life it is more difficult to do so. The days of happiness are now far gone and you must write about the sadness you feel within yourself. You long for those days to come back to you but you know you must move on from them. I think a lot of people can relate to the character inside the poem and wants to help them, because they have been through the same situation they have been through. I love here also how you bring a lot of person touch to the poem, yet you still have a lot of metaphors that play off each other well. This poem speaks volumes about what someone feels when they go through a tragic event, 5/5

Lovely piece, my friend.