Letter of Grievance

"Alas, you just left
me feeling like a
fool, waiting, and
wasting my life pinning
for something that
I never had claim to."

I know this feeling so well..
Reading this pulled some heart strings for me.
But in such a beautiful way, wonderfully written.
Loved it.

Well Penned..

This piece to me is why poetry means so much.

Its always helps to get your feelings down onto paper and poetry makes an art form out of it. (which btw is this one)

full of emotion!
Loved it!

Maybe its just my emotional state, but i read it as a letter to a disinterested and blase god who ignores all his peoples calls.

but thats just my opinion.
a brilliant write by the way, love the format

"Alas, you just left
me feeling like a
fool, waiting, and
wasting my life pinning
for something that
I never had a claim to.

Did it make you proud
to ignore all my messages?"

Girrlllllllll. This write is phenomenal! I wish I would have seen it sooner. It makes my heart hurt because I know what you are referencing here... but you stuck the ending, his loss :)

Thank god we can always turn to poetry to vent, express our feelings and just to feel better.

This is very heartfelt Mori, thank you very much for sharing this read :)