Black hole (haiku)

by naaz   Mar 19, 2018


The caged bird is now
flying in the universe
to find its lost nest.

This poem is for our very dear, Sir Stephen hawking.

My first haiku, I guess. Guys, I have no idea if every element regarding the format is correct or not?

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  • 2 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    A beautiful tribute. Perfectly penned. Great job on the Haiku and for receiving an HM!

  • 2 years ago

    by Mortal Utopia

    This is amazing, I love it so much :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is a picture and you have
    put me as a reader into it with so much
    depth to it...well done

  • 2 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Really loved it....so much expressed with such few words :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Judging Comment - Black hole (haiku) by naaz points 7 - personally I feel that haikus/senryus do not get the recognition they deserve because they're such short pieces but this piece by naaz said quite alot in such a limited word count.. The image is one which feels me with a little hope yet saddens me as Stephen Hawking's was ‘a caged bird’ around these part but since he's passed over, I believe that he will have ‘found his lost nest’ and now he can be one with the earth/galaxy he studied so much without any limitations in my eyes. Powerful short piece

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