little flower

by CJ Maleney   Aug 16, 2018


I plucked you from a meadow because I was transfixed by your beauty.

As you sit within that vase, I gradually watch you die.

The tips of your petals begin to change from yellow to brown. Your stem becomes weak and you fade away little by little.

I did this to brighten my own life. Yet it now feels darker.

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  • 2 years ago

    by Paul H

    A poem to ponder. Such pathos in so few lines.

  • 4 years ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    Such a beautiful but sad little write! I was transfixed from the start ...and so sad at the end for this "little flower! "( I will have seconds thoughts before pulling a flower again lol. )
    Brilliant poem that drew me in and has been a deserved win :D
    All the best ~Olwin.

    • 4 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you I had forgotten about this poem

      Regards

      Craig

  • 4 years ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    Such a beautiful but sad little write! I was transfixed from the start ...and so sad at the end for this "little flower! "( I will have seconds thoughts before pulling a flower again lol. )
    Brilliant poem that drew me in and has been a deserved win :D
    All the best ~Olwin.

  • 5 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This is a unique twist to a metaphor
    that has been written of before,
    I can't get enough of this poem
    and just how beautiful it is.

    There is so much beauty and sorrow
    mixed within this rich little poem- its just wonderful!

    • 5 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you so much for your comments and your vote. Means a lot and lovely to know who it was.

      Craig xx

  • 5 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    In just five lines there is beauty, feelings and a little warmth
    with an ending and a truth that all good things come to an end
    and that applies in every aspect of life doesn't it....take care

    Congrats on the Win :)

    • 5 years ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you Meena.

      Don't know what's happening but sometimes I don't see comment notifications.

      Sorry for via slow reply

      Craig x

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