Restraints

by Star   Jun 22, 2020


A sky full of clouds
imprisoned her soul,
as her cold wings
cocooned her
under colorless petals.

The dirt anchored her
fluttering spirit,
while her heart sought
the horizon.

The anguish within her
dispersed upon fields of
wildflowers;

she waited for
the endosymbiosis of
sun and salvation to
metamorphose her
into a
delicate
being.

    report violation
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  • 3 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    You have a wonderful way of flowing images from your pen and this is no exception. A lovely piece of naration full of colorful imagery. Milly x

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you so much!!
      Good to see you around, hope all is well!

  • 3 years ago

    by Everlasting

    I saw it. I mean the images. I felt part of the story. I like it.

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you Luce ^_^

  • 3 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Amazing word choice. Flawless scene narration. I found myself in the character too. The poem seemed very natural and the tone touched me!

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      Awwww thank you <3

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