Condolences to the Night

by Star   Oct 6, 2020


Fostered emotions
escaped
her
ragged soul,
as her
unsheltered heart
missed its rhythm.
Burning candles
lost their
dancing flames,
the moon
bowed,
and
the sun
sent her
warm rays.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Lost star

    I really love this poem, beautifully descriptive and flows perfectly. I think this has one of my favourite openings to a poem I've read anywhere. Saved to favourite, this should be nominated.

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      WoW thats huge!!! Thank you so much lost star :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Michael

    A gentle flow of words STAR, enjoyed reading this. M :)

    • 3 years ago

      by Star

      Thank you so much Michael, good to see you around :)

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