Heartache

by ...:NiKi:...   Jul 6, 2005


My heart is broken, my soul is bleeding
I wish right now, my lungs would stop breathing
and I know I deserve the pain i feel
but my love for you before was real
your trust I have broken, just like that
and now I cant ever take all that $hi+ back
hopefully all this goes away soon
and I can free myself from this shattered cocoon.

Copyright - Niki Schultz 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by Unrequited

    the last two lines were my favorite! someone could start reading this, and may hate it for some stupid reason. but once they get to the end, they would fall in love with it! great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    This was very good. Keep up the good work. I'm adding you to my favorites list.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Not your best poem, but it was good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wintersolstice

    Good poem, nice layout. Its like one of those snap shot moments in life you wish you could forget and it is noted down in poem form as if to help you come to terms with it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    sad and has strong feelings I love it good job

    -Josiah

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