Ache

by ...:NiKi:...   Jul 8, 2005


**This was not written by me... this was written by someone I know....**

As i keep taking
the level higher and higher
i feel the pain pulling me
into the darkness
the ache consumes me
like nothin ive ever felt before

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    Very Good Poem even though u didnt write it!

  • 18 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    It's beautiful, thanks for sharing! And thank you for all your nice comments!

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    This was good. I liked it. Very well detailed and expressed.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    i wish it was longer, but good job otherwise

  • 18 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Encorage your friend to expand on this it has great posibilitys.

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