by Leanne Aug 19, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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The man i had always called dad |
by Alessandro
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Ey thats rough |
by nadsyy
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Wow dis was so gwd.....i reli lyked it.... |
by Darien
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That's fantastic rhyming. Very well done. Unfortunately, there were times it seemed forced, but the poem, the message and everything else was awesome. Giving it a 5 for a good write. Keep it up :) |
by Leanne
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Jamie no problem love 2 no what ppl really think helps alot x x x |
by Jamie
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Again your using the same rhymes...bad, sad...really really basic, so many words rhyme really well together and there are dictionaries even to help you out with it! |