THE MAN I CALLED DAD!!!!! true story never happened 2 me though.

by Leanne   Aug 19, 2005


The man i had always called dad
He turned out extremely mad
And i wish he never had
He mad me feel real bad.

He always waited for mums goodbye,
And thats when he would start to lie
Once again he tryed
And started to make me cry.

I always thought it was right
I never thought he might
CLICK CLICK CLICK goes the little light,
Making everything go white

Once again he lifted my dress
I wasn't in much of a mess
I wanted to worry less
But i could not rest.

I slept at Marie's house
And in came her dad
I thought it would be bad
But he just said go to bed.

I couldn't believe it
It was night
I saw the light
And knew it wasn't right.

I tryed to get away
But in a different way
I couldn't help but lay
As i had just been raped.

He took some more pictures
And now i knew it wasn't right
Daddy now scared me
And i had to let it out.

I told my mummy
And she called the police
But they needed proof
so i used the pictures he had took.

The man i called daddy
was banged up in jail
for at least another 9 years.

I no this poem doesn't all rhyme but it is true i saw a story about a girl rapped by her dad her mum left him and the girl told him the girl realized when she was nine and the man was put in jail.
if you think your getting sexually abused you need to tell someone in detail. otherwise it might get worse.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Alessandro

    Ey thats rough

  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Wow dis was so gwd.....i reli lyked it....
    love dia mwaz xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    That's fantastic rhyming. Very well done. Unfortunately, there were times it seemed forced, but the poem, the message and everything else was awesome. Giving it a 5 for a good write. Keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Leanne

    Jamie no problem love 2 no what ppl really think helps alot x x x

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Again your using the same rhymes...bad, sad...really really basic, so many words rhyme really well together and there are dictionaries even to help you out with it!

    like this line right here

    And i wish he never had
    He mad me feel real bad.

    i dont mean to sound really mean but this sounds like a 5 year old could have written it kind of the whole "the frog sat on the log" deal going on there...

    CLICK CLICK CLICK goes the little light,
    Making everything go white

    that was my favorite part though, i thought the click click click part was very catchy and clever, good job imma go with a 4/5 cause i think you need to use better words and stuff like that