Am I Dead Yet?

Really nice poem so unique you have nice topics to write about and the way you express yourself is amazing i love it nice job!

Wow this is really good. It sounds like something that i would write. 5/5 Loved it!

I tried to leave a comment for your poem "Bye.." but it wouldn't let me. It was also very good! I voted a 5.

Becky
xoxo

I loved the repetition....very good....though still some rhyming seemed a bit forced like yet and net....but im probly jsut beeing really picky lol 5/5

Sounds great..... The poem was excellent. Very imaginative and gave me something to think about at the end.

This life its just to hard to live,
I just want to go,
I have a life to give,
Please tell me its so.
I think you should re-write this, it seems a bit...I can't explain it.
this seems more like a song, really. 4/5. not bad.