Left to Mourn

by Torn   Sep 20, 2005


Haunting me constantly,
Is a voice i cannot rid.
Telling me to give up,
That it's time to close the lid.

Of this perfected casket,
That has waited so long,
For my body to sleep in it,
Like this painful song.

You've given up i can tell,
You don't understand me.
The the pain i feel everyday,
Or the things that i see.

I'm so weak and frail,
In this body i hate.
I'm worthless i know,
This must be my fate.

I look around and am jealous,
Of the friendships they form.
Jealous of their happiness,
So I'm left to mourn.

*please comment and vote. It really means so much*

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Nice one hun...

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    Hey luvin the poem!!! keep writing! i can totally relate! i no how u feel 2 be left out while other people are happy And have it all but u feel like u have nothing...! i love your writing technique, check out more of my poems they remind me a bit of yours, read a life of total unhappiness, its my favourite! thanx 4 ur comment on my peom! im here if u need someone to talk 2!

    Luv Maddison xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Wow beautiful hun, very touching, I loved the third verse, very beautuflyy done & I can relate to it all, great work my dear keep it up lubzz you

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole Maree

    This was real deep but so beautiful and you are so right it's so weird but i completely understand your feelings. Keep up the awesome work. You're such an amazing writer because all your poems have so much feeeling and thought in them. Take care. Luv Nicole =)

  • 18 years ago

    by complication in my heart

    Heyyy-
    Thanks for the comment on my poem. I like this one alot...its great...you are a good writer...5 for you...

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