A Lonely Moon

by Princess Love   Mar 23, 2006


Staring at the starlit sky a lonely moon I see
Standing all by himself staring back at me

Guarded by the countless stars he stands alone
Looking for something or someone to call his own

As far as he can see its only the endless sky
There is no one anywhere to stand by his side

So alone all by himself he cries all night long
Loneliness and emptiness is what he calls his own

Dark sky and grey clouds are all he can see
Wonders, why cant anyone ever be with me

The pain of loneliness is just too much to bear
Thinking of this emptiness his eyes fill with tears

Staring at the lonely moon his pain I can feel
Because I see my own reflection staring back at me

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  • 14 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    The imagery was excellent. And the words easily portrayed the lonliness aspect quite well along with the metaphor/personification of the moon. Nicely done with all of it. Really this had been a cool write because it was beautiful and just...really an excellent concept.
    ~Faith-less

  • 15 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    This poem was awesome, i loved it
    thanks for commenting on my poem "Impulse", I have a new one if you have time to read/rate/comment it
    -Stay strong, and keep your words truely spoken

  • 15 years ago

    by simply taylor

    Once again you leave me amazed. i can really really relate to this one. and i really really liked it too.
    5/5.
    .me.

  • 15 years ago

    by EmptyEyes

    Haha, yes. I still have to wait 1 more year till i'm legal... and sorry for replying a comment here...heh...

  • 15 years ago

    by Cuddles

    This reminds me of a song I heard once-same concept. I love the theme, and the poem is simply too incredible for words. Excellent job!