by Jonathan   Mar 30, 2006

My love, you are so fair
your beauty is your hair
prime times we'll share
We are meant to pair

I've longed for you
my love will brew
so you can see it's true
but my world i so askew

upside down, and wrong
though my love is strong
put together by a song
with you I'll always belong

Broken down, i cry
my fear you will defy
in you I will rely
Let's no more say goodbye


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  • 14 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    Nice rhyming, keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by PS

    I really liked the first stanza and the last stanza. but the two in between sort of confused me. i love this:
    Broken down, i cry

  • 14 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    Good job! 5/5
    keep it up.

  • 14 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I really liked this poem. it shows strong emotion & i love the way you rhymed it. great job! 5/5*

  • 14 years ago

    by Kaylee

    It's pretty good but the rhyming does seem a bit forced. The concept and the idea is good but it doesn't stand out like it possible could. Interesting, though.