by Jonathan   Jan 12, 2006

Among all, I'm alone
Alone I'm everyone
Darkness closing in on me


Why am I left alone
Alone in a crowded room
The walls are drawing near


Wandering alone in the mist
I'm shattered
My soul is taken, and ripped apart


Despite people who calls me friend
And all their empty words
I'm absolutely and truly alone

Embracing the suffocation


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  • 14 years ago

    by Sole

    Again, such a sad and meaningful poem. I especially liked the repetition of the word Suffocation, it really brings out the meaning of the poem.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 14 years ago

    by amelia

    Wow ! i love the repetition... !!


  • 14 years ago

    by Emma

    Awe thats sad. i can relate. i like this alot

  • 14 years ago

    by Michelle

    Cool poem. great job! 5/5! wonderful!

  • 14 years ago

    by Megadrive

    I liked it, I dont think it deserves the rating it has because I think it is way better! It had a very dark feel to it, which is kewl=)