"My Dear"

by Jonathan   Jan 11, 2006

Loneliness closing in on me
The vapour that is thee is gone
From the ashes a bird is rising
A distant cry shakes me
My sight is blurred
Gone is the humanity
Forever lost is the hymen.
Lonely she stands on the sidewalk
Her cloak flutters in the wind
She's on fire
The distinct odour of gasoline,
Empties my lung
From the ashes a bird is rising


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  • 14 years ago

    by LiL K

    Wow...I'm speechless. This is very well-written poem...I love it! 5/5

    Thanks for your comment on my poem!


  • 14 years ago

    by Sole

    Your poetry is so deep - it is really heartfelt, and so sad again! Keep writing.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 14 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow...this took my breath away....love this.

  • 14 years ago

    by Hareem

    Very deep and full of bitter truth, yet expressed so effectively that it fills the purpose of the poem.
    Good work!

  • 14 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Wow. that was a beautiful poem! the imagry was so amazing. the vocabluary was advanced and intresting.