Out of the Blue

by Jonathan   Jan 7, 2006


I look at you from below
In the darkness i scream your name
You are bound to me
And I to you
Darkness incircles me
And i have forever lost,
Lost the hold of your hand
your tears are like raindrops,
Falling from the clear blue sky,
The sky that is your pretty eye,
Forming the very puddle,
In which i am destined to die

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  • 19 years ago

    by Sole

    You paint beautiful imagery, albeit dark imagery, in your poetry, it's excellent.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautifully brought out what u feel... good poem ! 5/5
    love
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    Very deep ... very expressive...
    lovely
    5/5
    love
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow holds so much pain...so great though...love it.

  • 19 years ago

    by Hareem

    Wonderful, I like the start & the end!
    A tiny thing though; why not punctuate it in the formal way?
    Another good poem.

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