The taming of the shrew

Dark sight in my heart
I fell in the devil's art
my beliefs were captured
that I ever wanted to gird

I think we all fall at some point. Nice verbage and very descriptive.

I reined my bloody thoughts
in all the psychopathic roads
I amputated love and kindness
using the dirk of loneliness

Good use of metaphors here. I can feel the lonliness and pain through your words.

And in my thorny black blood
I was tainted with the mud
I bowed and drowned so deep
allowing my arteries to seep

Again, more great metaphors, I Love This

I submitted to Lucifer's will
my faint heart tasted hell
and the stirring cruelty of pain
I suffocated in the shrew as a v

You have great insight into your own mind. I can tell that you draw from deep within. That is what makes your poetry so good and so interesting to read. Keep releasing, and I will keep reading. Excellent work.

Love this poem it really shows the flow (^_^) keep up the wonderful poem (^_^) 10/5

I really love the words you incorporate into this i haven't heard them used to often and its refreshing to actually read a more complex poem
5/5

Wow this poem is breathtaking i love the word choice and the flow of it, it is just a flawless poem!

This was absolutely breathtaking.
I'm like addicted to your poems =)
When I saw the title
I wasn't really sure what to expect
in of this poem
but WOW!! I am so glad that I read this.
I think this is 1 of the most powerful pieces I
have read.
I actually wanted to write something
sort of with this idea
but after reading this I don't think I could ever
do such an outstanding job.
Your words were like daggers.
I dunno what else to say except this was amazing... it deserves way more than a 5!!!

love
shellaine x