Remembering

by Cindy   Dec 2, 2006


I remember when we use to walk hand in hand.
We'd lay in the sun all afternoon trying to get a tan.
We had all the time in the world.
You were my guy and I was your girl.
Young Kids In love with each other.
Even after the lectures from mother.
About how much better I could do
How could I do better, I found you.
You stuck by me till the end.
We raised a son and cared for your dad
We had some of the best times we ever could have had.
We had a house, we had a car,We almost had it all.
That is when we took our fall.
I got sick and so did you.
There was nothing anyone could do.
You took such good care of me.
You made me happy a new morning to see.
Now you are gone, and I sit alone.
Not knowing what to do.
All I know is I ache for you.
And our times together, just us two.

Written By: Cynthia Graver April 24, 2001 In memory of my husband

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  • 14 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Im so sorry life has treated you this way. this poem is very good, you start off by sying all the time in the world, then that time is shortened and took away. makes you relaise how little we do know about what life will bring us.

    please never stop fighting. never stop writing either. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Such beautiful work on such a sad subject.
    You have true talent, and I am sorry you have had to deal with so much pain.
    This was truly a wonderful write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "We'd lay in the sun all afternoon trying to get a tan."

    That line made me smile, its exactly the kind of thing i try to do now, except i just go pink and then pale again, lol

    "All I know is I ache for you.
    And our times together, just us two."

    And as i continued reading the tears started seeping... it;s so bittersweet but as always excellently written...
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Benny Boi

    Wow... that hit a sad spot in me. atleast you were lucky enough to have him... just always remeber that

  • 17 years ago

    by Heidi Harover

    That was a really sweet poem, it kinda made me sad, but i liked it.

    ,Heidi

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