Express Yourself!

I like it how you open your poem right in the beginning. this piece was very powerful giving people confiendce (sry can't spell that word) . that they can do anything if they put there mind into it n heart n strength to go on. powerful message indeed.
5/5

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Woooww well i loved the idea soo muchh
it reminds me of this song"im alive":D:Dlolllll
well keep writing and never stop

5/5
lili

Amazing! I never knew that so much positivity and goodwill could fit into such a short space!

Everything is possible,
You never know until you try.
Fulfill your heart's desires,
Spread your wings and fly.

^^ Such a simple but effective rhyme, so sweet too. And it brings out four beautiful little truths that we should try to stick to. Lovely :)

Be as positive as can be,
Never say never.
Don't put yourself down,
You're beautiful and clever.

^^ Still has great flow and cute ryhmes too. Again with the four truths thing, such a reassuring stanza.

God never judges you,
Neither should any one else.
There's no such thing as a dumb idea,
So what are you waiting for?
Express yourself!

^^ I really like it when a poem includes a question, it's like actually reaching out, grabbing the reader by the shoulders and involving them. However, and I'm not sure if this is just me, I think it should be: life live! or something. It's just that express yourself, to me sounds like being creative, and life isn't all about creativity. Well thats just me anyway :)

A really sweet poem, I really enjoyed reading it. I gets a 10/5 (if only lol) and it's going on my favourites list!

Keep writing,
Em :)

I can really relate to this, i find it hard to express myself because im scared of other peoples thoughts, wow

What a wonderful little read! So bright and inspiring, and full of truths we all need to be reminded of (: Excellent!