Forever Fading

Thank u again.

This one was VERY emotional. Its not until the second stanza that you fully understand the meaning but that only make you want to go back and read it again.

Very sad and expressive.
5/5

Nothing was missing here. I think you said everything you wanted to say. It's unfair for me to say otherwise. I am able to both empathize and sympathize. Though it was short...you were able to say so much, and I think that's what made this so appealing. I say job well done and 5/5.

-Rolo

Awww.. this is so sad. what i imagine is seeing a friend cry. hearing them saying stupid things n u r just there just hearing them seeing them. making you die cuz ur words might not help but u being there for them is what makes them stronger.
for me idk there was sumthing else missing. it didnt give me the woo.. like ur other ones i have read. but i do like it. 4/5 for me.

TaKE CARe,
Frenchy

Now this poem, it sends the right message out, but the way you've written it, wasn't the best. Maybe adding a few more punctuation marks.

.:CiiNDY:.